100 word challange (this time actually 100)





The gloominess of the outside world was the only thing that kept me from inside my room.

The wind was howling, the moon was full, and it was high, shining above, glistening its light everywhere.


The doorbell rang.

I ran to answer the door, but when I opened the door, a package with my name on it greeted me.


“Allen. You can’t open that. Not yet”, Mum said.

I just really wanted to see what was inside.


But because of intelligence, my best bet was to wait and obey her.

And that’s what I did.

Because I’m a good boy.

Comments

  1. sarahmagaoa4 July 2021 at 23:35

    Hi Irwin,

    I love the use of descriptive language in your pieces of writing. Keep up the great work you are doing. I enjoyed the first two sentences of this piece because it entices you to want to read more.

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    1. Anonymous5 July 2021 at 17:30

      Thank you so much dearest aunty! ")

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